In the light of day
many things are clearer now—
I can see their shapes;
but it isn’t just my eyes
that I’m using to perceive.
* * *
If you were to seek
something outside of yourself
with an open mind,
you might possibly receive
insight that you’d always sought.
* * *
(The following three Tanka were composed during a trip to Flagstaff, Arizona June 23-26, 2014)
On a summer day
strolling unfamiliar paths
of a college town,
Suddenly came flooding back
thoughts of my own eighteenth year.
* * *
A cool breeze through trees,
the scent of Ponderosa,
wildflowers too—
nature’s vistas open up
filling me inside with joy.
* * *
Bright and colorful
masterworks of agèd hands
old-time Kachinas
lovingly reveal a past
when gods helped their people thrive.
* * *
On June 18, I gave a brief presentation and reading on Tanka poetry at The Golden Pen Writers Guild and then we took it on for our weekly homework. I used my first Tanka above as an example of the form. — dpk
© 2014 Douglas P. Kendrick, all rights reserved
Tanka are fun to write. Yours are beautiful
Merci beaucoup, Anne Marie! I have a lot of fun with them. (PS—I just found that for some reason my reply got stuck and never made it to my blog comments…)