Tanka – June 2014

In the light of day
many things are clearer now—
I can see their shapes;
but it isn’t just my eyes
that I’m using to perceive.

*     *     *

If you were to seek
something outside of yourself
with an open mind,
you might possibly receive
insight that you’d always sought.

*     *     *

(The following three Tanka were composed during a trip to Flagstaff, Arizona June 23-26, 2014)

On a summer day
strolling unfamiliar paths
of a college town,
Suddenly came flooding back
thoughts of my own eighteenth year.

*     *     *

A cool breeze through trees,
the scent of Ponderosa,
wildflowers too—
nature’s vistas open up
filling me inside with joy.

*     *     *

Bright and colorful
masterworks of agèd hands
old-time Kachinas
lovingly reveal a past
when gods helped their people thrive.

*     *     *

On June 18, I gave a brief presentation and reading on Tanka poetry at The Golden Pen Writers Guild and then we took it on for our weekly homework. I used my first Tanka above as an example of the form. — dpk

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Haiku in the Park

Sitting in the park
feeling gentle breezes blow
on a sunny day

Grass beneath my feet
cushions every step I take
as I stroll along

Flowers in a bed
brighten up the atmosphere
lovely to the eyes

In the distance, hear?
Birds are voicing their delight
in the springtime sun

Clouds are on the move
in the sky above my head
changing shapes again

Pleasant respite from
everyday’s incessant noise
makes me feel like new

Now I must go home
to resume my normal day—
that I’d left behind

 © 2014 Douglas P. Kendrick, all rights reserved.

Today’s Poem: me!

Quote

Wandering in vain
Has seldom let a man be
Anything but lost;
Is it any wonder, then
That people try to draw maps?

–Doug Kendrick

Yesterday, I made an effort to memorize the Naniwa Bay tanka poem that is used to start a Japanese Karuta match. With that buzzing through my brain, I woke up at 1:20 this morning with a haiku on my mind. I wrote it down in my bedside notebook, closed my eyes for 5 minutes and thought of the final two lines, turning it into my first-ever tanka (another Japanese poetry form also known as waka with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable format).

I’m actually quite proud of myself–hopefully I’ll be able to post these from time to time.

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